please

please

A Poem by Heather

I love you oh so much baba

and never will I stop

I always come to see you

I always come through for you

I know you don't live with us anymore

but when I'm undergoing surgery

why can't you come through for me

whether paying or just seeing me

like c'mon your excuse of work is getting old and ridiculous

please stop this mess

another thing I don't understand is why you see your family all the time but never me

explain this please because I am lost

I am angry when I don't need to be

© 2013 Heather


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A lot of questions unanswered in the poem. You left a lot of open ends. Hard to understand how people fall apart from each other. Once friends allow things and life to create separation. I did like the ending. left the reader with a feeling of sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Heather
Heather

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Blues Blues

A Poem by Heather