ME

You're gone

I'm lost

I'm losing my mind

I don't know what to do

I cant believe your not here

U left me in this place

This place that will bring me

To my slow and painful death

All because there was no love for me

There is no light in my life

It has burnt out

And I don't know

Where to look

I'm scared

I want to love someone

But my heart is at its peak

Of breaking

I cant take that pain again in my life

I only cry when there is rain

Rain hides my feelings

Ill always cherish you

I have been suffering ever since you have been gone

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

Deep poem, I feel the portrayal of loss and uncertainty within this piece, very well done, Heather.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Great panic poem of uncertainty and self questioning

[Ceejae]

"but my heart is at its peak Of breaking " wow that line ... very good poem

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the enjambment here, the considered content...

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i really like how you work with words. i really feel i am in your poem . its also show me i am not alone with my feelings . again thanks and keep writing

[Heather]

Thank you!! Means alot :)