The best feeling

The best feeling in the world is when you know he loves your more than anything

If I’m silent, don’t automatically think I hate you

I’m thinking about our relationship and how it affects me

I’ve had a rough life

I want the pain to end

When my prince charming rescues me

When you fall in love

You learn to look beyond the flaws

In my life, I have built a wall to block and harmfulness around me

All I want on a date is just to be with you

Won’t matter where or when we go

Reviews

[Death Heather]

I like his poem. Does he know how you feel? I he does then you should tell him or show him this poem.

[Heather]

Well there isn't anyone who I like at the moment.... I had written this when I reminded myself that one day I'de find love

[Death Heather]

I hope you find your love.

[Heather]

Me 2 lol

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Perfectly simple

[I am renee]

BEAUTIFUL :)

[khalid]

very sweet dreams...

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like about your writing is it honesty, the way you look at the problems of yourself and other young people. Excellent.

[Tex]

I have read several of your works. You are amazing.

There is a book you should buy. I read it when in my late 20s or early 30s but if I could have read it when I was your age I can only imagine how my life would have been different. it is a fast read. It will take less than an hour.

It is by the Poet "Shel Silverstein" it is entitled "The Missing Piece" it is a story told through Poetry, with lots of pictures, he presents the story like a child's book (note my age when I read it and don't be insulted) but the message is a message that some people never learn, but if we do learn it, we are so much happier.

I know you don't know me from Adam, but believe me i get nothing by you going out and buying this book... and it could change your life.

Now your poem, it is very good, it is "real" it is "direct" we can feel the emotion in it. You have a very clear way of expressing yourself that makes reading your work a pleasure.

Now, go buy the book! I've read mine about 30 times... It is Great!

[Heather]

Well i will keep that in mind
and thanks for the review :)

[Tex]

I look forward to buying your first book! :)

[quinfinn]

i love the concept of this write but, never settle for less than you desire, especially in a relationship. if you do you'll be settling all your life. keep up the writing, it has a good feel.

[Heather]

Thanks :)