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I don’t know what you think about me

But I would have to tell you sometime

I like you

There I said it

Think what you want now

I'm not asking for you to like me back

I don’t mind if you don't

I will eventually get over you

Don’t make fun of me in front of people

Saying that I like you and stuff

If I didn’t tell anyone, you shouldn’t either

Just know when I'm with you

I'm giving you a part of my life I cant get back

Don’t take it for granted

I have done nothing to deserve pain from you

Show me you want me and I will believe you

If I get hurt

I might not show it

Im not the kind of person who wants to hurt anyone

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

nice, reminds me of my younger years when innocence was still part of life. great write

[The Fallen]

Awesome poem, Love the lines
"I like you

There I said it

Think what you want now

I'm not asking for you to like me back"

Ik exactly what you meant by tht awesome write

[I am renee]

i can relate to this poem.. keep writing :)

[khalid]

love from one side is really dangerous...when we love, we expect the beloved to love us back however some people say its not very important for them to be returned but im sure there is always inner pain if it is not back...

[Leslie Philibert]

Clear, honest, impressive words

[Tex]

You write with such honesty, clarity, emotion, and authenticity.

I just love your work. I suspect there are real experiences behind the words and this is not just a meditation exercise because it is so raw.

Really well written. You let us get a glimpse of your heart. That is a true art... and one of the foundation blocks that love is built on. When you find someone who realizes how fortunate they are to have you... well you will get what you have earned... a true love.

An amazing write!

[Heather]

Aww thank you so much
your review means a lot :)

[quinfinn]

all i can say based on this write is....dont give yourself to someone who doesnt respect and deserve you...i see a recurring theme in your poems and it makes me feel deeply for you. i would like to see you develop some more pride. take yourself out and pamper your entire being....then write on the joys of being you. you have a poet's soul. all you are lacking is that warrior heart.

[Heather]

I have had a broken heart from pain so now I'm in the process of regaining my strength

[quinfinn]

been there....understood

[Heather]

yeaa... the poem of mine, "Jaano", is they reason why

[Erinne S.]

It absolutely amazes me at the pain and emotion you put into each piece you write. Definitely heart-wrenching and like I said in my other review I hope and pray things will start to look up for you! Just keep a positive outlook and know that you have friends to help you get through :)

~Erinne