My life with you

I do cry

I admit it

Not b/c I'm weak but b/c I am sensitive

All I want is something real

And it to be with you

But I've noticed when your in love

U hold onto things that hurt you in the end

When someone says I love you

Show it

Don’t only say it

Nothing would hurt me more

Than having you

The person who I care about

Hurt me

We always told each others everything

Including our deepest secrets

I beg of you not  lie about anything to me

I will be understanding

I don’t want to be completed

I want to be accepted

I have never felt loved

Or pretty

Or anything

Everyday I hide my fears

And sadness

With the mask of acting happy

Wif this doesn’t work out

I don’t want to cry when I hear your name

I want to still be friends

I don’t want to prove myself

I want to be me

Just know sorry wont work

When you are in the wrong

I will however keep the apology in mind

I would like you

To stay just the way you are

Tell me the truth

Just something that would make he happy

Would be when you mean what you say

If you do stop thinking about me

I will also stop

It will make me feel better

Don’t pretend you love me

To prove to anyone you can say it

Actually think about it

What would I ever do to you

I want to meet accidently

And fall in love

But show me you will be there

To catch me from getting hurt

When we fight it will show us

How much we are willing to argue to stay together

I want to feel like Cinderella

Don’t say goodbye

If you still love me

 

Reviews

[Hamza]

the way she is in a dilemma .. and the way you've managed to keep her in that state all along the poem .. excellent ...
give in and don't look back on your decision once and for all .. that's an advice ..

[khalid]

sweet dreams for a girl in need for love. a girl who is waiting for her dreams knight who comes on a white horse and takes her away...
you have really expressed such feelings in a very nice way..
only one thing...you have written...something that can make he happy.., i think you meant something that can make me happy...(me) not ( he).....
i have really enjoyed how you have written this...

[Leslie Philibert]

here you reveal your innermost - good work.

[quinfinn]

every girl wants to be that Cinderella princess at some time or another, waiting for her knight in shining armor to ride up on a powerful white stallion and take her to happy ever after. i hope you live that dream. this is a powerful and poignant write. well done!

[Heather]

thanks :)