Mind, Heart and Soul

Has anyone noticed how hard it is to let go

I have always had this problem

I dream impossible dreams

Try destroying my mind

You'll see how complicated it is

Try making my heart throb for you

You'll never see what I really think about you

Try ripping out my soul

And see how you will regret it

Reviews

[arvin]

ye. i had problems when talking about letting go. it really is hard to let go.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

I always enjoy your straightforward emotional poems, this poem makes my heart break a little. Great Poem

[quinfinn]

this is honest, direct and pendulous in nature...like an approaching storm. i think you have nailed the personal aspects of this issue well. i agree with Nicholas....it would resonate with some repetition!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the penultimate line a lot - strong !

[Tex]

really cool Try, Try, Try repetition, there is more here than is seen at first glance.