my broken heart

I've got 

Once again,

A BROKEN HEART

how will I ever cope?

I have never loved anyone like I did with him

This guy made me worth it and felt special

He helped me with my self-esteem

He is trustworthy

This is the most hurtful feeling 

I have experienced

In my love life

I fell for you

I am still falling

But I know there is nobody there to catch me

Reviews

[Farah]

nice! Truthful story on something

[Karmee]

Such a truthful, well written write.

[Ryan Henderson]

Very good and true poem, I especially like the last line 'there is nobody there to catch me' very good poem, thanks for sharing!

[lily]

Such an amazing and true poem.
Well done :)

[Kyle Sky]

Very good poem. easy to sympathize with a true worthy idea for a poem. I found the mood in the words itself a little dull though. Nevertheless, A poem of true emontion is atrractive through its meaning of motion.

[Mark]

I wrote two poems recently after a break up, I found writing helped. Reading your poem your pain and hurt is very apparent and I can empathise and what is nice is that you still speak highly of him which shows how much you cared for him.

I hope you find happier themes to write about soon, good work.

[Damien Davison]

There is nothing like losing a love, nothing. It feels like it can't possibly be right, can't possibly be happening. Like there is no way you could build with someone else what you had. Water the grass, don't find greener... Sad. Good job.

[Heather]

thanks :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

The flow is good and you have described your emotions very nicely .. kindly keep up the good work
take care
Qasim

[Heather]

Thanks

[Mia]

This is sad :( I'm sorry. Love is a crazy thing, when you're in it...when you lose it...it hurts and we're just trying to figure it out. This is a great expression of your emotions and while I'm sorry for your hurt, I'm not sorry for what come of it!

[Heather]

Thanks

[Mia]

My pleasure!

[Muhammad Qasim]

My pleasure

[Angela ☄️]

Veyr emotional. :/