what a show

what a show

A Poem by Heather

You Supposedly didn't make fun of me
you let your friends do it
I am innocent 
you acted upon as if this was a bad thing
all i did as a crime was have a crush on you
you broke my heart over bbm
you told my best friend you liked me
that's bullshit
you are a player and i know that for a fact
you then called me obsessed with you
i was NEVER obsessed with you 
i was obsessed with the fact that i was made fun of an sat there and watched
i though you weren't what everyone said you were: a mean, sneaky little player
but thought you were sweet. guess it was all an act
thanks for the show but i want my money back
you thought you were the only one good at this game but surprise
two can play at this game

© 2012 Heather


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very direct. almost feels like a letter to someone you hate. Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another good one , a look at something negative that will help you next time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very emotional and upsetting, I'm sorry you've been through this but you did a nice job of writing about it. Stay strong, and don't let anyone bring you down- you deserve better.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very relatable and honest, i like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a really intense poem, but I can definitely relate to it. Cheaters deserved to be trolled for what they do. Nonetheless, great write Heather and kudos

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Heather
Heather

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A Poem by Heather