When I ...

I wrote this I think in late 98', it was about this guy I had a crush on.

When I look at your face,
I see innocents.

When I look into your eyes,
I see your soul.

When I see your smile,
I see a happiness that is fullfilling.

When I hear your voice,
I hear the voice of my dreams.

When I think of you,
I think about having everything in the world,
And nothing else matters.
 

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

This is beautiful and wonderful. You did a great job.

[Michael X]

Very beautiful and dreamy, the wording is dynamic.
as well as the desirous- sensuous imagery.
Mike

[Christine]

Wonderful poem. I can feel your heart in your words. Great write!
~Christine :-)