autobiography with redundancies

autobiography with redundancies

A Poem by Hsien ku

She is moving over grasslands, facing downwards, looking under stones for something precious something known  -- feels her way by instinct walking, as birds do, casting her long shadow, seeing only shade but wishing light  -- now turns her body to face the sun, shadow also turning, spindly legs their beetle-black, withdraw   -- until unbidden fade, her own legs cold in rasping grass, she feels (but not enough) , the agitated light, now folding in and out of cloud  -- and soon in stillness stays until unbidden wind and muttering rain, a sound, no sound, no sooner night unfolding into stars, now out and into cloud, illume, but not enough, the ash grey dove grey sky and she, from stillness turns, by instinct goes -- only this roar of nonexisting in her skull and this need to feel the world as
real

© 2011 Hsien ku


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is unlike any writing I have had the pleasure of reading bfore. And it is a pleasure - thank you for sharing.

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oh, oh . . . you captured me

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Hsien ku
Hsien ku

Canberra, Australia



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