Galaxy

She was a whole on her own
yet she was always trying
to fill her heart with
somebody else's love
not knowing
that their love
wasn't enough to fill
the galaxy she carried as a heart.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in the words. Love does come inside. A child born teaches us. Love is in the all of us. Just need reason and purpose to grow. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Gaurav]

".....their love
wasn't enough to fill
the galaxy she carried as a heart." - this line is beautiful. Why do we always crave for the love from outside, when we are already filled with affection? Why is it so important to hear appreciation, even though we know that those are not true? Overall. it is a nice poem. Keep writing.

[Inject Positivity]

The reader was taken to a soul of a girl which is bigger than a galaxy and no love can fulfill it because it is much bigger than a galaxy.....I love the shortness and the way the poem has been thought out.....Very sweetly done my dear frnd....Full ratings for you with clappings!!!!!