The One That Got Away

The One That Got Away

A Poem by agirlwithasoul

Empty spaces
crashing thoughts.
Once fearless
she was now like a ghost.
'Cause when he left her
she wasn't prepared.
He never taught her
how to be okay.
He took away all of her
left her empty as a glass.
She just always meant to love him
but that's just who he was.
A stranger with a familiar face
loving only her grace.
She lost him
but she knew he was never there.
Instead of him
she lost her safety sphere.

© 2016 agirlwithasoul


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agirlwithasoul
I tried to do something different this time.I hope you like it! :)

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A sad and honest tale in the poetry.
"He took away all of her
left her empty as a glass.
She just always meant to love him
but that's just who he was."
When a shell is left. Hard to find proper balance again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


A melancholic atmosphere runs throughout the poem....I love how simply you let your heart bleed the thoughts in the pages....I really love the emotion of this poem....I can relate to your feelings.....This is your best poem so far for me.....Clappings!!!+full ratings.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


agirlwithasoul

8 Years Ago

Thank you,my friend.I'm glad you liked it !

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Added on February 5, 2016
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agirlwithasoul
agirlwithasoul

Lovech, Lovech, Bulgaria



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My name is Hristiana Dimitrova.I'm Bulgarian and I'm 16 years old.I started writing just a week or two ago.My motherland is Bulgaria and so I speak Bulgarian.I started writing in Bulgarian,but then I .. more..

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