A healed wound

She loved her scars so much
she gave them to the universe
and it turned them into shining stars
that light up the night sky every night
to remind her she was healed.

Reviews

[Rachael Lea]

What a beautiful idea! Those bad things in life whatever they are, teach us something and that in itself makes those bad things beautiful, they help to mold us into the person we are today. I love this because we all hold on to hurts of the past, it just makes a difference on if you let them ruin you or if you place them upon shelve to let the world see so remind you that you did it that you are okay. Great job you not only created an image you made me think and helped to inspire my mind to drift such a lovely poem and with so little in it but everything at the same time.
You could write a whole paragraph with just three words. Great job.

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you so much!This was amazing!I love the meaning you applied on it!Thank you again!!! :))

[J3ssInJupit3r]

This is a beautiful poem and it speaks to everyone with scars. Even though we all do not have visible scars, I believe we all have them anyway. Emotional, mental, the constant slice of pain that constantly whips at you when you are feeling your lowest. This poem speaks to everyone of every age, that you can heal though you have been cut and those cuts will turn into scars that will forever remind you that you fought through your pain to see another day. Thank you for sharing this inspirational short piece.

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you so much!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you use the words. Stars, being wounds to express healing. Very cool. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Daniel]

The strength you have shown here will shine a light for others.

[agirlwithasoul]

I really hope so.

[DaVoid]

Lovely imagery. We all want to be healed in some way.

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it !

[Nicole Schuster]

Wow. So much emotion, incredibly deep thoughts in just five lines. This is an amazing work, and something not many people are able to do. Very well done.

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!

[My Broken Heart]

Simply Beautiful..... Your way of thinking is beyond your years, you must have an old soul. I am amazed how in so few words you can say so much. The concept you used to describe healing of her inner pain is wonderful. I look forward to more of your work, because this little poem has brought a smile to my heart. Thank You So Much for sharing this.

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you!!! I'm really thankful for your comments and that you like my work! :))

[terry smith]

this is beautiful...a constellation of you...

[zombiebird]

This is so beautiful. I love the concept, it makes me feel very hopeful. Its simplicity is marvelous, and I love the unexpectedness of her loving her scars. Well done!

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you so much for the rating! :)

[Inject Positivity]

I never could have write a poem with this concept, you have amazed me.....I love how you turned her 'scars' into 'shining stars'.....Hats off to you mate....I would be more than happy to read more of your writings....Full ratings+clappings!!!!!!!

[agirlwithasoul]

Thank you sososo much!Your coments are a real inspiration for me!Thank you! :))))