Haunted

Haunted

A Poem by Relic

There's a haunted house inside me.
It retains unwanted anger, regrets,
and shame.
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It's dark, and it's spooky.
The cobwebs hold hostile emotions.
All that's positive and constructive
seems to have died. 
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It projects psychological untruths.
It needs to be demolished--
burned down and rebuilt.
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Now!

© 2024 Relic


Author's Note

Relic
Thanks Pat for the burned down line.

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Hi TIm, I like the brevity of this poem. We can become prisoners of our own mind and the negative thoughts it projects. It feel like a "time to pull the trigger moment" has come for the narrator. It is a constant battle to take the plunge and burn it all down.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Relic

4 Days Ago

Thank you Pat. Burn it down....I should have thought about that. Thanks for the comment.
The Analog Kid

4 Days Ago

Absolutely. Glad you liked my comment. Happy New Year!
Relic

4 Days Ago

Happy New Year to you to. :)

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Added on December 29, 2024
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