Holy Water

~

do all poets

    love rainy days?

to stand at windows

as though in pews

            peering out

at glossy streets

and dripping leaves 

under gray filtered

skies

to worship

    what rain

preaches?

Reviews

[Vol]

Relic,
Now THAT's a poem. give 'em a good image, give 'em something to think about, make it sharp as a knife, use your own voice... and there you are! GREAT job!
Vol

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Vol. :)