Illusion

Illusion

A Poem by Relic

Deep
      winter

Broad snowflakes
fall

Then rise

A bird

© 2024 Relic


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Life lives in this poem! Seasons come and go trying to give what they should, Spring perhaps a beautiful clarion call for the entire year. And, sometimes we're gifted with smiles, sometimes we need be patient, just as the soil is, just as Nature takes it time because it needs to. But try stopping the snowdrops and in due course the primroses, daffodils and all. As said by someone, 'like women, Spring smiles as soon as you look at her! Your words have conjured such wonderful thoughts for this landscapist! Thank you!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Relic

8 Months Ago

Thanks very much for your comment, emma. :)
emmajoygreen

8 Months Ago

Enjoyed your words and the accompanying thoughts they raised.
When snowflakes fall frigid winter is upon us and when they rise, spring pops in...with new life, blossoms, leaves, birds ,color....it is a re-birth of a season that sparkles and dances....and gives nourishment to our universe....nice write!
Warmly, B

Posted 8 Months Ago


Relic

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Betty. Let's hope this spring and summer are good ones. :)
Betty Hermelee

8 Months Ago

You’re very welcome
Warmly, B
I am glad Spring is here. Nice and warm in Michigan now. I don't miss Winter. I am happy like a Spring bird when the warm days appear. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Relic

8 Months Ago

I appreciate the comment, Coyote. I too like the spring. :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

A perfect May in Michigan my friend.

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Added on May 26, 2024
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