Illusion

Illusion

A Poem by Relic

Deep
      winter

Broad snowflakes
fall

Then rise

A bird

© 2024 Relic


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When snowflakes fall frigid winter is upon us and when they rise, spring pops in...with new life, blossoms, leaves, birds ,color....it is a re-birth of a season that sparkles and dances....and gives nourishment to our universe....nice write!
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Betty. Let's hope this spring and summer are good ones. :)
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You’re very welcome
Warmly, B
I am glad Spring is here. Nice and warm in Michigan now. I don't miss Winter. I am happy like a Spring bird when the warm days appear. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

I appreciate the comment, Coyote. I too like the spring. :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

A perfect May in Michigan my friend.

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Added on May 26, 2024
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