A brief moment in time.

A brief moment in time.

A Poem by Relic

short rope of youth      
our hands
bound to slip off  
eventually

© 2024 Relic


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Relic
The saddest part of life/.

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When we are youngsters we have boundaries, I.e a short rope; which means that we should obey them and respect them…. On the other side, our parents should love us, care for us, direct us , and ready us for adulthood…so the short rope will eventually get longer and longer until we are set off like flying birds to find another nest, another life…..
Nice write!
Warmly, B





Posted 7 Months Ago


Relic

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Betty.
Betty Hermelee

7 Months Ago

You're very welcome
warmly, B
Not necessarily the saddest, but brief indeed, especially when compared to the humblest little tide washed pebble.

Beccy.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Relic

7 Months Ago

Thanks for your thoughts, Beccy.

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Added on April 25, 2024
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