Amazing and beautiful dance of words Relic. You allowed the reader to see the stars and feel your thoughts. The wonder of the sky. So beautiful to see and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Visually beautiful Tim, but in the company of a galaxy of stars, even more so. Moonlight walks are quite something. Hope 2023 brings you health and happiness.
Some nights the moon really does remind one of a beautiful woman waiting to be admired. She might even resent the competition of the stars.
PS: Do a spell check on the first word of line 8.
Well, if you ask out the moon, it's going to be difficult to get her full attention. Because she's always tugging at the sleeve of one ocean or another. ;) I enjoyed this.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
lol good way of looking at it, Fabian. Thank you very much for the comment. :)
I've been here since 2009.
- Tim -
Thanks for stopping by.
3:20 AM -
The same as
all the other nights.
Darkness and me -
we still have nothing
to say to e.. more..