Car Haiku

An old

     rusted car

found sleeping 

     in the dense woods

I dreampt 

     of its past.

Reviews

[keith]

i hear ya! i have a collection of pics i have taken of old trucks in barns, under shed roofs, in the woods
i am drawn to the free form patina nature commands
a commanding write

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Keith.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this haiku
I have a fantastic collection of pics of old rusty cars in broken hill nsw I took five years back
Love the pic you chose

[Relic]

Thank you, Julie. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Oh yes, think of its former glory in days of youth :) Fabulous Tim, both in imagery and on an emotional level. Top job.

Chris

[Relic]

Thank you very much, Chris. :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a great inspiration for a splendid creation. Well done, says I.

[Relic]

Thank you. :)