Car Haiku

An old

     rusted car

found sleeping 

     in the dense woods

I dreampt 

     of its past.

Reviews

[Marie]

What a past you much have dreamed of, dear R... Am trying to imagine the many events which may have happened in the past in the car. Wonderful micropoem, so much said in so few words and a lovely picture painted of the rusted car and where you found it sleeping. Words complemented by a superb choice of graphic! Lovely gem! Thank you for sharing, R...

[Relic]

You're so kind for leaving all the great reviews, Marie. Thank you so much. :)

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear R... It is ever a great joy to read your wonderful poetry... :))

[John the Baptist]

Didn't Robert Mitchum drive this one in "Thunder Road?"

[Relic]

haha, I saw that movie, John. He just might have. :)

[Susan 🦋]

I'd turn it into garden art ;) (if I had a big enough garden)

[Relic]

I'm sure every biologist would gladly agree. Thank you, Susan. :))))

[SleeplessVolcano]

I love the different layout! It's amazing how so few words can say so much. I can smell the rust.

[Relic]

Thanks very much for your comment, SleeplessVolcano.

[AYVID N]

What a beautiful resting place in the deep woods! Such lovely visuals play in my mind as I read this. Yes, what were those journeys undertaken long past..? Where does all of it go after we are done traveling...?

[Relic]

Thanks very much for your thoughts, DIVYA. :)

[AYVID N]

It was my pleasure, dear Relic. Have a great day. :)

[Dave Brown]

this reminds me of earlier days when I still had the oomph to go parts hunting for my old builds
There was a graveyard where anyone just dumped off their old relics (nothing personal) and left behind a treasure trove of hard to find bits and pieces
A wonderful way to spend an afternoon but all gone now

[Relic]

Yes, all things must pass, as they say. Thanks for your thoughts, Dave. :)

[Fran Marie]

As long as the car wasn't name Christine
lol..that's what came to my mind as I read
this one..great six line haiku..i enjoyed

[Relic]

haha, I don't think it was, Fran. :) Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

That was a great car once. It could tell us many tales of yesterday. Nice use of words and thoughts Relic. Made the reader ponder and think.
Coyote

[Relic]

Thank you for your thoughts, Coyote. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ken e Bujold]

a busy highway of thoughts speed from this simple but so well constructed little gem.

[Relic]

I appreciate the comment, thank you. :)

[Sean M. Addams]

Love this one. Simple but very complex. Overall great job !

[Relic]

Thank you, Sean. :)

[Sean M. Addams]

Your welcome