Car Haiku
A Poem by Relic
An old rusted car
found sleeping in the dense woods
I dreampt of its past.
© 2023 Relic
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What a past you much have dreamed of, dear R... Am trying to imagine the many events which may have happened in the past in the car. Wonderful micropoem, so much said in so few words and a lovely picture painted of the rusted car and where you found it sleeping. Words complemented by a superb choice of graphic! Lovely gem! Thank you for sharing, R...
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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2 Weeks Ago
You're so kind for leaving all the great reviews, Marie. Thank you so much. :)
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2 Weeks Ago
Most welcome always, dear R... It is ever a great joy to read your wonderful poetry... :))
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1 Year Ago
haha, I saw that movie, John. He just might have. :)
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1 Year Ago
I'm sure every biologist would gladly agree. Thank you, Susan. :))))
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1 Year Ago
Thanks very much for your comment, SleeplessVolcano.
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1 Year Ago
Thanks very much for your thoughts, DIVYA. :)
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1 Year Ago
It was my pleasure, dear Relic. Have a great day. :)
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1 Year Ago
Yes, all things must pass, as they say. Thanks for your thoughts, Dave. :)
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2 Years Ago
haha, I don't think it was, Fran. :) Thank you.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you for your thoughts, Coyote. :)
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2 Years Ago
You are welcome my friend.
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2 Years Ago
I appreciate the comment, thank you. :)
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2 Years Ago
Thank you, Sean. :)
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Added on July 30, 2022
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