Car Haiku

Car Haiku

A Poem by Relic

Old Abandoned Car In The Woods Photograph by Paul Freidlund - Fine Art ...



An old
     rusted car

found sleeping 
     in the dense woods

I dreampt 
     of its past.

© 2023 Relic


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What a past you much have dreamed of, dear R... Am trying to imagine the many events which may have happened in the past in the car. Wonderful micropoem, so much said in so few words and a lovely picture painted of the rusted car and where you found it sleeping. Words complemented by a superb choice of graphic! Lovely gem! Thank you for sharing, R...

Posted 3 Days Ago


Relic

3 Days Ago

You're so kind for leaving all the great reviews, Marie. Thank you so much. :)
Marie

3 Days Ago

Most welcome always, dear R... It is ever a great joy to read your wonderful poetry... :))
Didn't Robert Mitchum drive this one in "Thunder Road?"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

haha, I saw that movie, John. He just might have. :)
I'd turn it into garden art ;) (if I had a big enough garden)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

I'm sure every biologist would gladly agree. Thank you, Susan. :))))
I love the different layout! It's amazing how so few words can say so much. I can smell the rust.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much for your comment, SleeplessVolcano.
What a beautiful resting place in the deep woods! Such lovely visuals play in my mind as I read this. Yes, what were those journeys undertaken long past..? Where does all of it go after we are done traveling...?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much for your thoughts, DIVYA. :)
Ayvid N

1 Year Ago

It was my pleasure, dear Relic. Have a great day. :)
this reminds me of earlier days when I still had the oomph to go parts hunting for my old builds
There was a graveyard where anyone just dumped off their old relics (nothing personal) and left behind a treasure trove of hard to find bits and pieces
A wonderful way to spend an afternoon but all gone now

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

Yes, all things must pass, as they say. Thanks for your thoughts, Dave. :)
As long as the car wasn't name Christine
lol..that's what came to my mind as I read
this one..great six line haiku..i enjoyed

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

haha, I don't think it was, Fran. :) Thank you.
That was a great car once. It could tell us many tales of yesterday. Nice use of words and thoughts Relic. Made the reader ponder and think.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, Coyote. :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
a busy highway of thoughts speed from this simple but so well constructed little gem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

I appreciate the comment, thank you. :)
Love this one. Simple but very complex. Overall great job !

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Sean. :)
Sean M. Addams

2 Years Ago

Your welcome

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Added on July 30, 2022
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