The perfect scene

The perfect scene

A Poem by Relic

Her gaze focused on
the crowd of plush trees 
that radiated with violets
purples, reds and blues
~
She imagined the summer wind
moving her dress
in a gazebo 
that snuggled up to the stream
The path next to it
held puddles of sunlight
on the plush lawn
~
pearly gates couldn't
be far away
~
but her eyes were diverted
to the window when snow started falling
outside on the air conditioner 
~
She turned to make supper 
~
reality always interrupts

© 2023 Relic


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Relic
Thomas Kinkade

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Your last line says it all. What she pictured in her mind was a daydream, a wish, somewhere she would rather be but, instead, she was in a cold weather place with responsibilities. I love how you had the reader in that colorful, peaceful place and then, our eyes moved to the window along with the protagonist and we saw the snow. I really like this poem. Nicely done! Temp

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Yes, a daydream from a 'painting' on the wall. (Thomas Kinkade) Thank you, Temp. :)
Temperance

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
I think you have named the upside of Alzheimers.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

An interesting interpretation from what I was thinking. Thanks, John. :)

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