Broken Soul

this basically describes how i felt when i write this poem,i often express my feelings through words,broken soul is a good poem,in a way to feel the hurt i feel,hope you like :) written 9th july 2009

BROKEN SOUL

i know that depression has taking control
that it eats away at my very soul
i feel less alive,i wish i'ld just die
those feelings i feel ,they're just a lie
within the broken soul,i start to cry
i cant seem to wipe my eyes dry

Broken Heart,it wont heal,nothing works,i break down
no ones there to hold onto,it really hurts,it kills
to know what i believed wasn't meant to be real
that im alone in what i do.
i struggle and search within
my Broken Soul
i've lost control
yeah,i've lost control...

I often look back and ask myself
was it me,or was it you?
i break down more,just want the truth
i know you didnt think of me,when you leaved
if you had my love,why think of someone else
i think of things that you said
that just went right through my head
was i really that bad?? to be told it was a waste
Was i really that sad?? to be told to get a life

what you did to my heart,was shread it apart
all those actions and words,left me with a broken soul
i guess that was your big role

Broken Heart,it will soon stop,wont beat again,it will end
No ones there to heal the pain,each time it drives me insane
to know what love is,i dont feel that no more
I'm alone in what i do
i struggle and search within
My Broken Soul
i've lost control
damn,i've lost control...

Why should i deny what i feel,emotions really kill
i want them to go,i'm already unwhole
most of me is fading,my broken soul
i don't want to say it wasnt real
but i want to forget,im full of regret

Broken heart,
Broken Soul
Broken words
Broken promises
Broken past
Broken love
Broken Future
Broken...............

my Broken soul,forever unwhole.......

Author's Note

i hope most of you who know how i feel,are happy and have moved on :)

Reviews

[cquig]

This is a great poem, actually I was hearing music in my head. I could see Evanescence doing this. I think that when we feel/become broken, it's great when we are able to move on, but it's also healthy to hold on to some of that to make it easier to survive the next time.
Well done, lots of emotion.

[Deleted]

Hey. Any remotely compassionate person should feel some sort of empathy, because any remotely normal person has probably felt this way at some point.
I really liked it; it really expressed how you were feeling.
If you really are what the poem says, I hope you feel better.
I realize those words don't mean much...coming from a stranger...but well, what can I do? (haha)
Good job!