Love

Idk... describing love?

Love is like a ghost,
Stalking you,
Filling your mind,
With thoughts of hope,
And thoughts of hate,
Thoughts of giving up,
Filling your body,
Making complete,
Or it can shatter it,
Love is beautiful,
But also hopeless,
An odd force,
That drags two together,
It will ruin your world,
Mess it up,
But make it complete.

Reviews

[Skye]

Love is a contradiction, giving your heart, while also taking another's. My only critique would be to check your punctuation. A comma may not be needed at the end of every line, and periods may be more appropriate where a comma is. Also, the line 'making complete' may need a bit a revision to add to the clarity of the poem. Otherwise, it's a very nice poem :)

[Horseluvared]

Thank you :3