If you want me...

Hmmm...

 

Boy, if you want me,

then you'll clean up your act,

because I'm not some skank hoe,

who'll just fall for that crap.

Baby, if you want me,

then you'll have to shape things up,

because I'm not some lousy hooker,

who'll just smile and say, "Wa'sup?".

Honey, if you want me,

then you'll treat me well,

not like I'm a stripper,

does that ring a bell?

Sweet heart, if you want me,

then I'll probably be yours,

but what I need is a gentlemen,

who won't treat me like a hor-,

never mind.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I prefer gentlemen, to perverts....

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this poem. It is modern and talks about wanting a man who knows how to treat a woman right.

[Ki]

I do prefer gentlemen. 100% . Great, truthful write!

[Harley Ann]

hahaha this is a good one. i really like this. and there are very few grmmar/spelling issues (except when im guessing you were going to say "hore" is spelled "w***e")
you should listen to the Emilie Autumn song Gentlemen Aren't Nice...
this poem reminds me of it. wonderful job!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I agree because I don't need to be treated like that either. People think I'm easy, but I'm really not. I will refuse anything anyone asks me to do...unless I am married to that person. This was an awesome poem as well. I can relate. Thanks for sharing. :)

[nono]

Love it. not so sure on the langauge but you know you wrote it so that's how it should stay. But yeah i'm the same way. I love it if only more woman would stop thinking they're in love. You Know! there is a difference between thinking and knowing your in love.