Love triangle

Love triangle

A Poem by Kia-chan!
"

Love triangles are very difficult...because it's terribly hard for you to choose.

"

 

Boy Number one:

He is nice.

Very nice.

He holds your hand.

He listens to all your problems.

He is sweet.

He is kind.

He is charming.

But he is'nt perfect.

He tells you he loves you,

and wants to be with you.

He is wonderful,

and you love him.

but,

is he the one?

 

Boy number two:

He is rough.

He is sensitive.

He has an attractive dark side,

But he also has a hidden soft spot.

He is a smart alec,

and he can always make you laugh.

He's a lady's man.

and a man's man.

he is not perfect,

but you love him.

And he loves you.

But is he the one?

 

Love triangle.

That's what this is.

When a girl loves two boys,

and the boys both love her,

it is hard to decide

But in the end,

one must be chosen.

So who will it be?

Will it be boy number one,

with his sweet personality,

and charming smile?

Or will it be boy number two?

With his bad boy characteristics,

and his flirty personality?

Which one,

will you choose?

 

 

© 2010 Kia-chan!


Author's Note

Kia-chan!
I've never been in a love triangle before, so I don't know what its like....

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lol! I'd definately choose boy #1! (just because it'd Yuki! I KNOW it's Yuki!) But, then again, Boy #2 because I automatically think Edward Elric! LOL! And then, boy #1 reminds me of Alphonse Elric, but I love Ed more :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Just two insignificant nitpicks: "is'nt" should be "isn't", and "lady's" could be revised to "ladies".
Aside from that, I enjoyed this and can relate. I have been in this situation and its tricky. Thanks for sharing.
Keep on writing.

_WZC

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Kiah. I am a teenager. I love writing, music, drawing, the internet, chinese food, tigers, kitty-cats, Fruits basket (By: Natsuki Takaya), manga, Anime, and Japan. I live with my mom, my da.. more..

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