sad relationships...

sad relationships...

A Poem by Kia-chan!
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Sad :(

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children looking out there windows,

waiting for their fathers to return.

But in the end,

the battle ends,

and so does daddy's life.

 

Mother's watching their ultrasounds;

their baby's are still not born.

But all that time will go to waste,

for a miscarrage is waiting to come.

 

There are all kinds of relationships,

they can be bad, or good.

But the worst kind is the sad kind,

when karma can take place.

A loved one can die,

your husband could leave you,

and terrible things could happen.

So keep your friends close,

and your enemies closer,

for, dare I say,

you do not want rivalry to spawn a sad relationship.

 

 

© 2010 Kia-chan!


Author's Note

Kia-chan!
This is a word of advise. You should always remember this poem.

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the last few lines were a little choppy, but a really sweet and, dare I say, sad peom. I really liked this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow i can relate to the beging i lost my dad in 4th grade 100%

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Kia-chan!
Kia-chan!

Andover, MN



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My name is Kiah. I am a teenager. I love writing, music, drawing, the internet, chinese food, tigers, kitty-cats, Fruits basket (By: Natsuki Takaya), manga, Anime, and Japan. I live with my mom, my da.. more..

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