I never thought I'd say this....

By the way, I'm so ego-centric that I actually gave the main character my name....Please regard me kindly.... This is my fantasy....And the boy in this story is'nt real...

 

    "Kiah, can I talk to you in private?" The boy asked. Kiah was sitting on the bleachers at her high school, watching a volley ball match. "Sure", she answered. Her and the brown-haired boy Walked out of the gymnasium and into the empty hall. Dearest reader, I call this boy, "The boy", because I have not given him a name. He does not need one. Afterall, this story is nothing but a fantasy that was going on in the narators head last night, and is not real in any way. It is nothing but a pure dream, and or fantasy.

"Kiah, I think I've fallen in love with you", the boy said. Kiah was astonished. The truth is, she had been in love with this boy since the beginning of the school term, and he had not noticed her once. Until now, of course. "look", she began, "I'm sorry, but why are you telling me this now?". The boy stared at her with sad eyes. She felt nothing but pitty for him now. What had she been thinking this whole time? This boy was nothing but a child. A confused teenager. She did'nt need a boy! She needed a man! A man who was'nt a coward like him. "I've been in love with you for four whole months now, and you never once realised that. And even though you've known me for four months, your just confessing your love to me now? What, was I not good enough for you?" She asked. He just stood there. Not thinking, not doing anything. He was a coward. Nothing but a coward. "I never thought I'd say this, but your too late", she said. And with that, she swiftly walked away. They never saw eachother again, because at that moment, the narator was awoken from her dream, and was off on her way to school.

Author's Note

I had this dream....LOL.

Reviews

[Harley Ann]

well. first, i love your name lol.
second, other than quite a few grammar mistakes, this was cute. i like the end, how he finally runs to her and all she van say is "youre too late."
very interesting :)

[Shelly P]

this was intresting... i like how it twisted around and didnt become a happy ending like in the movies lol

[Red Ears]

I dont view him as a coward! it took four long months but he told her that he loved her. He was rejected but at least he could move on. I really enjoyed this! good job =D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was good. I would have done the same thing to the boy if he did that to me. I would've cried myself to sleep every night. I would tell him he is too late as well. I liked this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan..]

Awwe. This is very cute. :) Dudet keep on writing stories like this and thousands of people will read your work. I like how the girl moved on quickly, hehe sounds like something I'd say to a guy. :)

[Daydreamer54]

i think this was a bit egotistic. lol! mybe ur dreams were trying to tell u something...

[nono]

awww it's so cute

[November_Rain]

you would....