Pushover

Awww....Sad, but true :(

 

Pushover, pushover

what happens to you?

you sit around dreaming,

but there's other things to do!

Pushover, pushover,

Just what can you be?

you are everyones target,

when it comes to trickory!

They say that your stupid,

they tell me your dumb!

but it's still cruel to pick on someone,

even if it's simply for fun.

Because to pick on a pushover,

is sheerly pathetic!

a real trickster is clever,

and more sympothetic.

so the next time you see a pushover in danger,

don't join in on the teasing,

just keep being a stranger.

Author's Note

I am a fellow pushover myself. please feel free to make fun of me :(

Reviews

[azlamalo]

you are everyones target when it comes to trickery-- awesome :) and i love the ending...well done

[Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan..]

Awww This poem fits me perfectly. :(
I like this poem.
All of your poems remind me of myself. :)
Never let other people bring you down.
And stand up for yourself at least every once in a while.
I stood up for my self for the first time in a long time the other day. :)

[Keevan]

I guess there's a pushover in all if us. Great poem : )

[Anonymous]

I am also a pushover...
Your spelling always gets me tapping my fingers, but I guess if you don't have spell check there's nothing we can do about that, hm? :P
I loved the rhymes. Lovely vocab choice.
But this bothered me a bit;
"But it's still cruel to pick on someone,
even if it's simply for fun."
The awkward misplacement of the "lone" line there broke the flow you had going. But while I didn't cringe in sheer horror, I liked the overall poem and structure you have here.
Excellent work.

~Black Rose