Fake best friend

Fake best friend

A Poem by Kia-chan!
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A true story :(

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the birthday parties.

the sleep-overs.

the good times.

The bad times.

What were they?

was it just a waste of time to you?

Were you really having fun?

Or did you do it because you felt bad for me?

You said we'd be "BFF's for life".

But that was a lie.

Just a selfish lie.

Because before I knew it,

you were suddenly too good for me.

You left me behind.

But it was'nt fake to me.

I had fun.

Those times were'nt a waste.

Those times were supposed to be happy.

Not just for me, but for both of us.

Because a real best friend,

does'nt pretend.

A real best friend,

is'nt a fake.

© 2010 Kia-chan!


Author's Note

Kia-chan!
My best friend was a fake :(

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I think this is sad. I am sorry that you lost your best friend. If I had lost my best friend. I would spiral into a depression that is so severe no one would know what to do. I would be dead by that time...I am sorry a good. Thanks for sharing. :()

Posted 14 Years Ago


i had a fake friend once so i can really relate to your poem, good job......

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:( Very good poem but im sad for you, outo-chan

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is becoming too true in everyone's life. It's sad. Sometimes I feel that I was the fake friend. It feels terrible. Even though the subject of the poem is so sad, it's a wonderful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This i can completely relate to. My best friend was a fake and Betrayed me

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

who?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2010
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Kia-chan!
Kia-chan!

Andover, MN



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My name is Kiah. I am a teenager. I love writing, music, drawing, the internet, chinese food, tigers, kitty-cats, Fruits basket (By: Natsuki Takaya), manga, Anime, and Japan. I live with my mom, my da.. more..

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