Destination:Love

Awwww....sad :(

 

She's been waiting for a long time.

she see's you at school, and she likes you.

But she wants to love you.

she wants to know that feeling,

that she hears about on love songs.

But when she thinks she loves you,

she see's you with another girl,

and the feeling slips away,

like a wave, when it hits the shore.

But she wants to love you.

So she tries again,

but then she see's you with your friends,

and feeling ends.

But she wants to love you.

So she tries one more time.

and when she finally has that feeling,

she tells you how she feels,

but you reject her.

And you leave her standing there,

with tears in her eyes.

and she cries,

because she had finally found her destination,

but then it slipped away again.

It was on that day,

that she almost caught,

her destination: Love.

 

 

Author's Note

This is kind of.....wierd. but even so, I still like it.

Reviews

[Cody Wiggins]

I dnt think its weird i think its cute great great job

[Kazian]

very good poem. I like that last line...

[Daydreamer54]

Wow! I like it! I'm sure a lot of ppl can relate to this. wanting someone that doesn't want u back. This is sad, but that's life. One day there would b someone who feels the same way u do. :)

[Ki]

really love it! ;) girls always say they are in love.. they want to love when they don't.

[Keevan]

this is an awesome poem. great job! =D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I didn't think it was weird. I can tell this is about you. I feel bad that you have to see that everyday. I do too, but I got over the kid I liked. Thanks for sharing. :)

[ClosingAccount]

OK!? Cool