chapter five

  Sophie and I walked home together again that day. I still had'nt warned her about  how I was bad news. I looked at her, and then I decided that I had to  be strong. "Um, Sophie", I began, " I do'nt think you should be hanging out with me". Sophie looked saprised, " But why? you do'nt want to be friends?", asked Sophie. "No, it's not that I do'nt want to, it's just that, well, I'm not exactely, friend material!", I said. " Yes you are! youve been super nice to me, ever scence I met you! you even helped me find all my classes!", Sophie was over-exagerating. I had'nt been completely nice to her! When I first saw her, I called her a "punk" and shoved her aside while I kicked open my locker! Poor Sophie had been putting up with my crap from the start! " Look Sophie", I said. I pulled up the sleeve of my shirt, revieling a long scar running down my arm. " Look at this! I got this in a fight with some of the members of my gang! A girl pulled a knife on me! do you want this to happen to you?", I waited for her reaction. Sophie did'nt respond. She just stood there and stared at it.

Reviews

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I agree with keevan. This does seem a BIT incomplete. But good

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I would do the same thing. I would fight if I had to. I could break someones neck if I have to. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Keevan]

this chapter doesn't seem done. you should work on it a little more, K.M. But other than that NICE WRITE! and thanks for reviewing my poems and stories!!!
Plz read my short story, A Changing Heart. I just KNOW you'll love that one!!!
Sincerely, J.J.