Not Tonight, Not Ever

Breathing

is hard when

your blood is rushing and your thinking

too much at once

Thinking

is hard when

you cant breath

from the distress and agony.

 

Have I been living or dreaming?

Will it ever come easy to breathe again?

Reviews

[Tai-San]

i like this. very powerful. strong. i really do like it.

[Wildecat]

A few words with a lot of meaning a very powerful poem.

[nostal]

Wow. Short but powerfull. Nice job.

[hey]

very nice, i love the ending

[Kiara]

such few words
expressed in so much
meaning : )
those are the best
nicely done!
-arabella

[Lina Lynn]

You managed to capture a lot of emotion in a short poem. Very well done. Keep up the good work.