Suffering

A poem about me suffering dealing with a broken jaw and wired shut mouth.

I hate dealing with this with a broken jaw.

I saw those doctors putting wires in my mouth.

Now I can’t eat and talk.

I’ve been dealing with this while walking for a past 4 weeks.

It won’t get out of my head for what I’ve done to deserved this.

Sometimes I wish I was dead, so it will end.

My pain and suffering won’t never end.

Whenever I sleep I feel unconforable.

Please make it stop.

This x ray is for my broken jaw. 

Author's Note

Got punch in the face at this party on May 21 at this house party. I got drunk and did something stupid and now I am suffering from this and got to wait for 2 more weeks to get the wires out of mouth.

ignore grammar problems please

Reviews

[Chris]

Ouch...is such a small word for so big a hurt...

wish you well...

Chris

[Tina Kline]

A very chilling experience. I can't even imagine the pain that comes with this procedure and enduring it while you recover. Nice job.

[Black Cat Fever]

This sounds like a real nightmare! Cool that you wrote about it.

[Calypso]

I hope you feel better soon!

[Star Wolf]

A very painful experience. I wish you a speedy and full recovery.

[Casey Dusek]

What an awful, and horrible experience! But always remember, the greatest suffering and the greatest pain only leads you to becoming a better person, and a inspire you to push your writing to all new levels. Never sit and complain when a story that could change lives could be written! Hope it gets better soon!

[The Analog Kid]

Sorry to hear about our experience. We all learn from our mistakes.

[Eric Cox]

Sounds like an awful experience. This is a good expressive poem. lol and good wishes.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

OMFG I'm sooo sorry Ira...I wish I could make you feel better....and I know it's stressful on you. I love you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You will lose weight. To be blocked from good food would do me in. I like the desire to escape the wires in your mouth. A very interesting poem.
Coyote