Doll Shop

Enter if you dare: A poem about living dolls.

Come on in and enter in my doll shop.

You will see living dolls starring at you.

Their eyes will move side by side whenever you look around.

You won’t believe your eyes.

You will see them like a big surprise as they become alive.

My dolls can move everyday.

My dolls are made from little humans.

They will haunt you down like demons.

Dare to enter in my doll shop.

My dolls will love to play with you.

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Oh Ira, this is a very creepy writing and brings back memories of a doll we used to have. It was a my buddy doll and gave me the creeps cause i felt like it was always watching me. Didn't get to view the video since my browser doesn't support it on this old mac, but I can imagine it being very creepy. You are the horrormaster after all, and your writing shows it!

[ms. barrie]

I find your poem very well written, i love the flow of your words, how each line unfolds new terrors. actually, i always did have a fear of dolls...and reading your poem, reminds me...WHY! great write, thanks for sharing!

[ur_ginger_girl]

really cool poem it reminds me of chucky

[quinfinn]

you know, this is a delightfully wicked idea and if you aren't offended by my saying so it reminds me of the "puppetmaster" series of horror films. cool to put into poetry. nice write!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Scary, like the version of Toy Story we never saw.

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Lovely horror dolls! Very good poem, straight to the point and with a sweet threat. Great!

[Abi Smith]

great visual and feeling within this poem. the music makes it even more vivid.

[Kiri Nells]

I just had to read this because I've written a horror poem having to do with dolls too. (The Doll Collector) Great job!

[Dom]

Creepy! If i ever seen a doll walking around, id probably die of a heart attack lol Awesome job on ur poem. :)

[The Analog Kid]

I agree with Demetri J. Nice to see you trying a poem. Cool concept, just flesh it out a bit with suspense and not so blunt.