Doll Shop

Enter if you dare: A poem about living dolls.

Come on in and enter in my doll shop.

You will see living dolls starring at you.

Their eyes will move side by side whenever you look around.

You won’t believe your eyes.

You will see them like a big surprise as they become alive.

My dolls can move everyday.

My dolls are made from little humans.

They will haunt you down like demons.

Dare to enter in my doll shop.

My dolls will love to play with you.

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please

Reviews

[Loner]

U have done it again! a true classic poem of dolls loved it from the start till the end.

[George Love]

Creepy, dark and disturbingly written. You did well by letting the reader's mind fill in some blanks here. Nicely done.

[Magdelena]

OMG!!! I had to turn the player on didn't I???? Wow! Now me scared.. That little boy on the end is staring at me... I see his eyes. wait... Yup, he's lookin alright!

Oh this is way scary dude. It's like good enough to put forth in some kind of scene.. Wow

Okay outta here. no sleep for me tonight.. That song!!!!!!

Mags xxx running........

[Vanna Renee]

I am terrified of dolls.
Just saying. (:
I think you're absolutely insane for this idea.
BUUUT (: I liked it.
I wish you would've rhymed but I respect how some people don't.
It was interesting and short(:
Great job

[Tate Morgan]

LL My daughter was obsessed with her dolls and swore they were real Then my son was born and she took over waking him every 5 minutes to feed him I said Aris he doesnt need that much feeding.To which she said at the age of 6 I have been raising babies all my life I know what he needs you have no idea lol

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good start to the story. I know people who are scare of dolls because of the movies. Could be a interesting tale if someone could find a new twist for the story. A very good start.
Coyote