A Ghost Dance

A poem about a man saw his ghost girlfriend dancing ballet in a graveyard.

I stand in a graveyard looking at my girlfriend gravestone,

I send my flowers of red roses on her stone.

She used to be a beautiful ballerina dancer,

She died by a heart attack.

In my dreams I see her dancing in next to me.

I miss her smiled as she stared at me.

I close my eyes crying over her grave.

I open my eyes as I see the sky turning darkness

I see smokes of fog passing by her gravestone.

I see her dancing like she a ghost through the fog.

I called for her but she can’t hear me.

She kept on dancing as she came near me.

My eyes were in tears of joy when I saw her.

I told her to don’t leave me.

As soon she was done dancing,

The fog disappears and she was gone.

I will never forget her  dance.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Both chilling and sad, a touch bittersweet. I really like this.

[Omegax45]

Quite heartbreaking. You did an amazing job.

[Caitlyn Blake]

Ira, your imagination is awesome.you have such good ideas! i did like this.very much.

[Tina Kline]

A ghostly sad poem. I could see all this playing out as I read your words.

[deeps]

My Goodness this was so sad as well as dark. I liked it though.
It's very awesome!

[XxWhatsername86]

Beautiful, sad, dark and just out right really good! The song definitely went perfect with it.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

eery but gorgeous poem! the song went perfectly with it, nice work!

[Loner]

Beautiful and touching poem in short a heartfelt piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

The content of the poem is good but you have over used the words gravestone, stone and grave. It makes for a distraction in my opinion in a short poem. The imagery is amazing and I can picture a man with his head laid on a gravestone at night with the clouds passing over head. It is a somber scene and you have clearly pour the emotion into this. the flow of this poem is a bit off here and there in some place.

[Ruth]

Excellent!
The visions that spirit grant us! lol
Another cool poem love, you have a talent for darkness
xx