Our Love World

A poem about everyone needs to fall in love on whoever you want without being single.

 

I can’t take this pain that I see on what is going in our world,

It’s driving me insane.

All I see is greed and hate,

Let it be peace with our world.

Everyone deserved to fall in love,

That’s all they ever dream of.

They don’t need to be alone,

They don’t need to have this drama.

Man and women should fall in love forever.

I wish people will understand that.

My dream is that everyone should fall in love.

Without love, our single heart will always feel like is dying.

Be in love whoever you want to be with.

Don’t let anyone break your heart.

You all need to be happy and fight for those who tried to break a relationship apart.

We don’t need anyone shouting at us if we fall in love.

They all need to do the same thing to find someone who cares.

Let everyone in this world should know what love really is.

Let it be peace with friendship and love.

without war, crime, and hateful s**t.

This is what our love world is all about.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I agree with you. Maybe there would be less violence and hate if everyone had love. A person can hope. Nice job.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Hehe, I have no feed back for this mate,
good write though...I love the message...

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Nice

[Loner]

Such deep and sincere thoughts iam really impressed and wish this could come true also.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was a really cute poem. I loved reading it. It was a really strong poem too. I loved it, Ira. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

The statement you make in this poem is strong and I agree with more love less drama. The flow is off but the idea and the sentiment put into this poem is good.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i totally get this one, especially the first line. its hard to take the pain that goes on this world, its somewhat torturous often if you don't have a bright light of some sort in your life.