Our Love World

A poem about everyone needs to fall in love on whoever you want without being single.

 

I can’t take this pain that I see on what is going in our world,

It’s driving me insane.

All I see is greed and hate,

Let it be peace with our world.

Everyone deserved to fall in love,

That’s all they ever dream of.

They don’t need to be alone,

They don’t need to have this drama.

Man and women should fall in love forever.

I wish people will understand that.

My dream is that everyone should fall in love.

Without love, our single heart will always feel like is dying.

Be in love whoever you want to be with.

Don’t let anyone break your heart.

You all need to be happy and fight for those who tried to break a relationship apart.

We don’t need anyone shouting at us if we fall in love.

They all need to do the same thing to find someone who cares.

Let everyone in this world should know what love really is.

Let it be peace with friendship and love.

without war, crime, and hateful s**t.

This is what our love world is all about.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Great poem Ira, to bad there is not more of this kind of thinking.

[The Fatal Lover]

This poem is so different compared to half the stuff you post, but I really like how you wrote it and enjoyed every word in it. Great job! ^^

[batgal512]

I like it....

[Eric Cox]

Cool compassion in this, great job.

[The Tea Party Mouse.]

Lovely idea, but easier said than done.
Love hurts, and goes very wrong at times. But I still agree, the world does need more love. :)

[George Love]

A very well done poem. This shows your talent,

[Daniel Gardner]

Change of pace is always great. This poem shows your true skill. Keep up the good work.

[Frifthor (D^2)]

You're always odd, HorrorMaster. I read the stuff you send me and half of it is always gory horror fiction and the other love poems. The poem is well done, and the words you speak in it are wonderfully placed in their simplicity. A good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are a great dream. United Nations was create after WW2 to end war and violence between countries. What do they do at the United Nations? USA is the worst. The world powers don't respect the U.N so the world followed. I pray for peace and no hunger daily. We live in a world where a million people will starve to death monthly. A million will die of HIV. It is a confused world. USA will spend 1.2 trillion in war. 1.2 trillion could feed and shelter this world. A excellent poem. You made me think again.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Wise words, wish the world would work that way. (Look at all those 'w's in that sentence!)