Come back

A poem about having your only best friend coming back to chill with you.

Please come back, so we can chill.

Since you been gone it made me ill.

You are my true friend.

Please come back!

I’m sorry that you feel sad.

If you chill with me, I will make you feel glad.

I know how you feel on being heart broken.

You just got to move on.

We all miss you dude.

Your true friends and your mom miss you.

I’m not gay, but I have to say I miss you man.

Please come back, so we can hang again.

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Just heard he is coming back on thursday. :)

[cheynicole]

Exceptional piece... i feel your pain... when all you want to do is chill with your friend they're depressed and secluded, not wanting to hang out. Not wanting to talk. Heart felt. Considerate. Great structure.

[Alicia Schroeder]

straight from the heart, nice writting

[Black Cat Fever]

Very hear felt, I hope this dude came back.

[Eric Cox]

Very cool poem. Love the message of wanting a friend to return and ease sadness. Nicely penned.

[Star Wolf]

Very sad poem, and the sadness comes through strongly in the pleading that is going on for your friend to please return and hang out again.

[Tina Kline]

This shows you really care about your friend. Very touching and I hope this person comes back to hang with you again.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Very nice work

[ZoeyNevermore]

this very sweet i know who this is about and i think this very much a show of ture friendship and devotion...

[nighttimesnoozer]

tell ur friend to suck it up and not be so sad and to hang with his friends
good little poem