Come back

A poem about having your only best friend coming back to chill with you.

Please come back, so we can chill.

Since you been gone it made me ill.

You are my true friend.

Please come back!

I’m sorry that you feel sad.

If you chill with me, I will make you feel glad.

I know how you feel on being heart broken.

You just got to move on.

We all miss you dude.

Your true friends and your mom miss you.

I’m not gay, but I have to say I miss you man.

Please come back, so we can hang again.

Reviews

[Loner]

Very nice poem very touching.

[George Love]

Good start, weak ending. We've been there, we've all lost friends and you express that well here.

[Senseless whatever]

Started off deep then got a little silly there at the end. Hard to get a true feel for this one.

[Magdelena]

Sad when those we care about lave us. Even for a short time even. It makes us realize that the time we share with those we want in our lives we have to make the most of it and try to keep that friendship going..
Liked the way you brought this forth. Well done.

Mags xx

[A.Lee]

Its hard when you lose people. Especially close friends. Well written poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime someone knowing they would be missed. Keep them around awhile longer. I like the positive feel of this poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ur_ginger_girl]

awsome thats really how you feel when you a friend and you really just wanna hang with them.

[dangerbooze]

I love this! When you miss a friend and just want to hang out with them again. I have those moments all the time.

[Hippy]

its very sincere i like that it has great flow with a few touchy spots but it dont matter its art and this is pretty good

[Ruth]

Lovely verse love, friends mean everything!
Great write
xx