Love

A love poem about a man propose to his girlfriend.

I took her outside in the middle of the night near the lake,

We saw the moon shining so bright.

I look into her green eyes, as we both cuddle.

Her looks made me smile.

I go on my knees, as I take her hand.

I open the box with a shinny diamond ring, as she stand up.

She smiled at me, when I asked I love you, would you marry me?

She gives me a hug and said yes I would be your wife.

We started to make love until the sunrise is up.

Author's Note

I wish I have a girlfriend right now, so I can get married and have a family. I'm 25 years old and I hate being single. :(

If you want, you can share this love poem on myspace or facebook. :)

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

This is a very good love poem. It's full of warm images. Nice.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was very intense and emotional. I like.

[James Watts]

I know the feeling. But this write, aside from your other works, shows that you have a heart and soul. In today's world heart soul mean absolutely nothing or it sometimes feels that way. But I know there has to be one person out there that looks beyond materialistic needs and I will bide my time til then. Don't give up. You will find the one for you. Or she will find you.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

yeah i know what you mean specually if you tired of evrytime you fall for someone that your mum or dad always telling superticious stuff everytime you find a person you like

[Solitary Dreamer]

I loved it.. any girl would be lucky to have you:) just don't give up hope!

[haley]

This is adorable. Sweet and simple, some scene a girl always wants :)

[The Fatal Lover]

Wow. I loved it. Very romantic and sexy. I understand the single thing. I hate it as well. And as soon as I can. I want to get married to a wonderful man and start a family. I love kids. =) Great job.

[zombiikillah666]

so nice. (:

[Kat Plunkett]

Yeah being single can really suck sometimes..but i think this is the first love poem i've ever read by you.. lol it was good though :D

[Senseless whatever]

Cute write. Needs a little tuning for flow and wording.