Love

A love poem about a man propose to his girlfriend.

I took her outside in the middle of the night near the lake,

We saw the moon shining so bright.

I look into her green eyes, as we both cuddle.

Her looks made me smile.

I go on my knees, as I take her hand.

I open the box with a shinny diamond ring, as she stand up.

She smiled at me, when I asked I love you, would you marry me?

She gives me a hug and said yes I would be your wife.

We started to make love until the sunrise is up.

Author's Note

I wish I have a girlfriend right now, so I can get married and have a family. I'm 25 years old and I hate being single. :(

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Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This has beautiful emotion and the sentiment is great but the poem feels like a conversation to me. not quite sure why. I do like the word and the overall feel of the poem

[Zoe Anne]

This is a nice poem; warm images, passionate feelings, and the starting event of a new adventure for two lovers.

[Loner]

I will pray for u that u get a girl friend as soon as possible. Sooooooooo sweet i cant help drooling over yr thoughts in the poem.

[Loner]

Soooooooooo sweet who would not want to marry you if you propose her like this so ROMANTIC.

[KatiePie]

This is beautiful :)
-Cathrine

[Sean M. Addams]

like this very different from you but thought you did a great job on this... detail is done well

[Dorian Faust]

This paint's a very romantic scene. Don't stress being single though. It's just a temporary situation I am sure :D.

[heich]

i'm 17 and nbsb..i write aboutn love but never had any..hmmp..i envy the girl in the poem..nice writing..

[Ice QueenJen]

this was a fantastic poem about love, I am still waiting for my guy to come and do that for me! you will find the one, don't rush things!

[Black Cat Fever]

This creates a nice love scene. I like it.