Love

A love poem about a man propose to his girlfriend.

I took her outside in the middle of the night near the lake,

We saw the moon shining so bright.

I look into her green eyes, as we both cuddle.

Her looks made me smile.

I go on my knees, as I take her hand.

I open the box with a shinny diamond ring, as she stand up.

She smiled at me, when I asked I love you, would you marry me?

She gives me a hug and said yes I would be your wife.

We started to make love until the sunrise is up.

Author's Note

I wish I have a girlfriend right now, so I can get married and have a family. I'm 25 years old and I hate being single. :(

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Reviews

[ur_ginger_girl]

I wish I had a boyfriend It seems like everyone else does it f-ing sucks being single I wish I could feel that way for a guy all the guys at this school are either stupid and hot or ugly and smart why can't one guy be both and settle for an ugly girl

[The Master of Fright]

Hope you get a girlfriend! You'll find one eventually. Don't let life get ya down. You'll find somebody that loves you.

As for the poem, it's much different then your usual writes, isn't it? However, it's a good different. I really like the poem. It's very captivating and calm. Great job on this.

[Daniel Gardner]

Love will come in time. Nice work though. Well written.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was a cute poem. It made me feel all happy inside. I loved this. Thanks for sharing. :D

[A.Lee]

Very sweet. Love will find you when its ready. Don't rush into it. :)

[shammi]

very nice poem horror master., wish u gud luck to find a girl friend soon

[The Analog Kid]

Pretty raw, but still a poem. Nice to see your other side, Horror!

[Jon]

Good poem horror master! Alot different than any of your other ones..lol Your right being single can be a pain!, I've still been looking for the girl who could stop me in my tracks like coyotes talking about but I'm pretty sure it will happen eventually if that's what god want's. I'm sure you'll find a girl like that too, just takes time and patients. Well great write horror:D

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem of love. Love is the best and hardest days in a life. I found my wife on a dangerous missions in Central American. Took me 37 years to find a woman who stop me in my tracks. Somethings come when at will. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dinesh Sairam]

Well, this is not a poem mate. Don't feel I'm being hard on you, every stone indeed need to be hit and turned into a statue.

And you use almost same imagery in most of your poems. Try using more imaginations.