Robbers

A poem about robbers who like to steal other people stuff and money.

Why do you like to rob for, money?

There is lots of jobs out there,

so you can be able to get money.

You don’t need to steal other people belongings.

They work hard for it, you f*****g low life.

Everyday and night all I see is you robbing,

Just to make how you bad you really are.

Well it’s not,  it will make you even more sad.

You know why?

Being a robber will take you to prison.

I hope the cops will treat you like s**t in prison.

Your life will get ruined even more.

We also have the right to f*****g fight you.

If you tried to run away, we will find you.

If you tried to ride in your car, we will still catch you.

You belong in prison, while we watch you suffer.

I hope you die, when you cry everyday in prison.

You will never see the real world.

My message to you, don’t ever rob from us again.

Author's Note

I hate them so much, they make other people depressed. When they steal from us.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You have a clear concise picture here of robbers and robberies.. no one likes being robbed...yet you are robbing yourself, as I have done many times with typos and grammar. the first line sounds as if you are talking to money.. no comma... can be able to get... needs change.
Get ruin .. ruined...
If you tried.. past tense you have present tense after .. if you tired to run we will find you... tried to run we would find you ..
I am not being mean as you and others may think .. this is top writing .. and you are a good writer robbing yourself from being a great writer.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I agree. I hate when people steal from others. They do deserve to go to prison. This reminds me of what happened when I was in 7th grade. A robber stole from a bank and our school had to go on lock down. It happened a street over from our school. He had a gun and he ran from the bank. I was completely scared. Great write. I agree and I love it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[chaffy]

truthfully, i dont find theives that bad.. not like they are good... i dunno.. probably because i never met a robber before..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Thieves are true lowlifes. This poem has a childlike innocence to it, but
it is very dark. It has an anger that threatens to explode at any moment.
Your work is always a thrill.

[deeps]

This is cute. like this

[zombiikillah666]

hey..?!?! Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar..... who me? couldnt be.... *looks around* good job. i like this. *gives you cookie.* haha :D

[James Watts]

I can't stand a thief. Don't know about seeing them die lol, but they definitely need to be taught a harsh lesson. Of course I have known some thieves that were not bad people, they were pushed to a point where it was the only thing they could do to support their family. I am in no way advocating that this is right either, just pointing out that not all thieves are despicable vermin. The majority, yes, but some are just confused and making a bad decision in thinking it is all they have left.

[Kat Plunkett]

I hate when people steal from me.
Most of the time if im at someones house
and see something they stole from me, i take it back.
because it is already mine, and its not considered stealing
when it is already yours to begin with.........
I hate when they brag about stealing from stores and try
to make it seem all badass.
It's not badass. they're just a bunch of lazy whimps
who wont get a job.
if they're stealing because they are homeless,
i think thats a different story...

[Sam Severn]

This is such a power-packed poem, HorrorMaster! I love the brutal way you lay out what will happen to the robbers ("If you tried to run away, we will find you/If you tried to ride in your car, we will still catch you")....I also hate that people do this to each other, so I love the simple (and vengeful!) honesty in this! ㋡

[Ruth]

So true, they don't know the hurt they cause xx

[Star Wolf]

Right you are! They're all SOBs who deserve to be hurt very badly for the hurts they cause.