I was stupid

A poem about being drunk and the next day you start having a hangover

I was stupid for going out drinking,

I wasn’t thinking right.

I wanted to have fun.

I throw up at my friends house.

Now with this hangover,

I feel like a dumbass.

I look in my wallet,

I realized my money gone missing,

I think they took my money, as I don’t remember.

I am crying with tears in my eyes,

My heart slowly dying.

I’m really sorry for everything,

I will never drink again.

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please
Yes I was out drinking last night and I felt so bad right now.

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Oh the perils of wanting a good time. Been there, done that- but I was at a party place and was robbed, so even though its harsh it is a lesson learned! I rarely drink anymore either....... good heartfelt poem too.

and your grammer is improving!

[Drew]

I dont understand why your freaking out. You got wasted and spent all your money at a bar so what? I'm not trying to get at you right now I just think your thinking this is a big deal when its not. Like why are you crying for going out drinking and blowing some cash? Was it your first time drinking or something? Once again not trying to be rude just curious.

[Avoiry]

It's right out there and brash and to the point. You can feel the flustered feelings that are in the piece and the mains disjointed nature. Though the last line is words i think everyone has said or will say at least once.

[HorrorMaster]

I will still drink, but not as much.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. However I think it would have sounded better if it was 'I was stupid' rather than 'I'm stupid'

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is an honest write. nice story.

[Hippy]

dotn feel bad about drinking man it happens and people always say its the last time but it usually isnt, but in this line i feel it should be gone instead ot got

I realized my money got missing

[Black Cat Fever]

Feeling bad about doing something is good, because perhaps you might think about NOT doing it again when faced with that choice again.

I like the rather raw way you wright, you put your own voice into this with your personal word choice.

Way cool!

[The Analog Kid]

We always "go back Jack and do it again"...I know I do...LOL!