Good work, and this is a story I know many can relate too. Now, stay with your style and try to be consistent through your work. This is good stuff, and you are doing much better in this style.
Getting ripped off by your friends has to suck, but it was a nice write. If I ever got ripped off by any one of my friends, I wouldn't think much more of them as friends much anymore..
Interesting poem. Your grammar is really improving, which is great. It has a real meaning, which I like. I think you did a good job on this one. I would start ranting about "Oh, I can relate, I've done it before", but I haven't. I've never been drinking, so I'm trying to focus on just the poem. But I hope you feel better!
Oh.. almost everyone has done this once or twice! Unfortunately most have to learn the hard way before they learn.. so don't feel too badly.. it will make for funny stories when you get older (which are bittersweet!). Drinking socially can be fun but you need to plan a bit.. have a trusted friend system and a designated driver or taxi.. Just think you lost a few dollars but gained a valuable lesson. I agree with Eric Cox as well.. everything can be good in moderation!
It's good. I've been there, quite recently...bad night. I woke up with not only my wallet gone, but my cell phone, watch, necklace and iPod. Then I also noticed my fly was undone. There was a lot more, but I'll not go into that at this time... Lucky I was just drinking with friends.
ANYWAY
Really good, we can all relate to it.
Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..