Ditch

This poem is about all my fake friends who ditch out on me and made me very mad.

Why you do this to me?

What have I ever done to you?

You never pick up the phone when I call,

All day long I wait for you.

You never shown up, when you said you going to pick me up.

It seems like you are ditching me everyday whenever I grown up.

I thought we were friends.

I hate you when you do this to me.

It is making  me think you are a b***h,

I have something to say to you,

F**K YOU FOR ALL THE TIME YOU DITCH OUT ON ME.

Author's Note

I'm sorry i'm just very mad because one of my band member said that he was going to pick me up today at 2pm and he never shown up or call me to see what going on. I'm sorry I don't have a car, but at least he could of call me if he has something else better to do instead of band practicing today. Plus I got fake friends who do this to me every time.

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

the poem is very clear cut to express anger, but i felt the last line was kind of uneasy to read, and its easy to get 100 so called friends but hard to get one true friend, it takes time to find such a friend and even more extra time to retain that friend, give something to the friend like trust or affection whatever you wish to get in return...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

anger makes for good writing.

peace

[Brasso]

The rage is very clear. I like how it flows, which I think is used to represent the ongoing anger that is occurring during this, it's like none of my poems, which are nothing to do with my life, which is a nice change. The simplistic language is also good because it represents how simple the anger actually is (no offense meant). So yeah, overall a good poem, short, sweet and to the point with plenty of emotion behind the words
Cheers,
Brasso

[Vin]

I love the way you made the rage so clear, and made the reader actually feel it instead of just reading it and being able to tell you were peeved off. I hate fakers myself but as for the late thing I can't say anything cause I'm really bad for that myself haha but generally you wrote an amazing piece man, well done!
Thanks for sharing with us all :)

-Beth

[QuietPoet]

Im sorry your friends keep ditching you, you need new friends, theres plenty more out there. Hope you feel better.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

man..there is no question about how you feel about this situation.
The emotions are really strong. You captured that frustration for
us all to feel.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful. You capture that anger we all feel when friendship is tested.. when it goes from surface to something deeper or falls flat right before us... True friends stay through it all, no matter how hard.

[Coyote Poetry]

I can't stand waiting. I decided years ago. I'm the driver. People who are late make me crazy. I understand the poem. Strong and to the point. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marquise]

im mad that im just getting to this poem! sounds like my ex-girlfriend.

[Star Wolf]

It seems the people who matter to us are the ones who have the power to hurt us the most. Because they matter to us.