Death

A poem about my grandma that pass away few years ago. I miss her ;(

I see her laying on her bed,
I stared at her eyes all red.
I feel her heart stop beating,

Then tears pour from my eye,

as my mom opens the door, seeing me cry.
She saw her laying on her bed dying.
I told my mom, “It seems like she is dead.”
Death appearing in her house.
It came to take her away.
Her life will never be the same,
as she checks into heaven on this day.

Author's Note

I wish she was here still alive right now. :(

Reviews

[chaffy]

i always like your pictures.. they give a really nice impression and the music.. the poem was beautiful.. i hope you feel better your grandma who died.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice to see your softer side Horror. The truth is: death doesn't have to be scary. Real nice short, yet powerful piece. Cool pic also:)

[Frantzuu]

wow great poem, very horrific in a good way :D

[Frifthor (D^2)]

A good write Horror. We all lose someone at one time in our lives, and though we often times wish it didn't happen, often times we have to try to feel happy for the individual. We can't live forever, but the emotion we feel at the loss seems like it can. But in the end we know we have to move on, no matter how tragic the loss. I feel the poem says a good bit about that, from the mourning to the end. A good write.