Death

A poem about my grandma that pass away few years ago. I miss her ;(

I see her laying on her bed,
I stared at her eyes all red.
I feel her heart stop beating,

Then tears pour from my eye,

as my mom opens the door, seeing me cry.
She saw her laying on her bed dying.
I told my mom, “It seems like she is dead.”
Death appearing in her house.
It came to take her away.
Her life will never be the same,
as she checks into heaven on this day.

Author's Note

I wish she was here still alive right now. :(

Reviews

[George Love]

Darka nd well told. This is one of you best.

[Blossom]

I really like how death is a physical. this is haunting and frightening beautiful.

[ur_ginger_girl]

realy awsome beutiful in a goth dark way.

[ms. barrie]

hauntingly beautiful. wonderfully written.

[Senseless whatever]

Cool interesting write.

[silentsmiles]

that was beautifully written

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed dear,
i can feel the words bec i lost my dad a month back.

[Ruth]

Creepy! lol
This is awesome, the realisation of death is something we all may dread to a degree!
Excellent verse!
xx

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

certain poems make me so chilly and cold. shes still here i bet ya

[Black Cat Fever]

How very sorrowful. Seeing someone you love die is such a hard thing to endure. It's nice to keep those you love alive in your writings.